Talk:Cursed Hunter Chronicles lll Twin winds of the Tundra/@comment-5028662-20121128162640/@comment-5041097-20121128221830

Thanks uka for your advice ill keep th I's a little more less used and try to put commas in where i think they should be  annd yeah uka you can be my assistant i dont like calling people lackies xD so feel free to edit and give me pointers since this is my first fanfic.and you know how you threw so much emotion in you story well...can you give me some pointers on that cuz i dont want my whole dialouge ending with she said or he said becuase like you said dont wanna ruin the fluidity.

Thanks  :)