Talk:Fanfic:The Darkstar Knight (Part 3)/@comment-77.1.187.168-20110711151120

"Now here's what I have in mid", seems to be one of the most used Quotes here xD Good continue, keeps the same style it had all the time. Fire Diablos, huh? Now if that's no devil then I don't know too.

Just something noring at me the last two updates: once you wrote "spiked/clubbed tail", and that just was odd to read, especially as you managed to avoid such things in your writing style. It is just a little thing, but changes alot while reading it, at least for me. Also, the way you described the fight and especially the rage of that Crimson blos here sounded more like a wikia article about it's behavior in combat than a real subjective impression of it. It was just too formal to fit the "fight to the death"-situation. It works in calm moments, but IMO it doesn't fit into the heat of battle.