Talk:The White Star Chronicles VII: Attack of the Mountain Dragon/@comment-4775842-20120605225738

I think I got everything but my mind was wandering, so I may've missed something. You didn't get everything when you previously fixed this, but you got the major stuff. I made sure to insert spaces where they were needed. Other than that it's 'A okay".

This is also my favorite chapter so far in the series. Isn't it great when you read these sorts of stories and an unexpected love story crops up in it? It really sucked though in a book I read a while ago where the female part of the 'possible relationship' was unmercifully killed off. :(