Talk:Fanfic:Desert Winds and Calm Sands/@comment-3253026-20110705011531/@comment-2053489-20110705220225

Just done reading the new stuff, and it's pretty interesting plot-turn. Not that much to say otherwise. General writing style has improved and I am far to tired to think more now xD

And yeah, time I continue my stuff too, though it's hard, as not only other stuff waits to be written, but also MH doesn'T hook me that much as it did earlier. And while reading it again after getting a bit better myself, I noticed that my Fatalite storys have a nice idea, but that stuff ain't that great kinda... The fights are ok, I think, but I don't like the overall story anymore. I'll most likely make it end quick soon and start over new.

Though your stuff seems promising, keep up getting better like this.