Talk:Fanfic:The Darkstar Knight (Part 3)/@comment-77.1.187.168-20110711151120/@comment-1203191-20110712012405

Yeah, sorry if you didn't like it, but I had my reasons for making it that way. The "spiked/clubbed" tail was a quick way to describe its tail; like a combination of a Monoblos and Diablos tail. I'll be honest, this battle was not in my original plans, but I focused so much on story development in part 2 that I felt I had to add more action so readers wouldn't get bored waiting for more battles and loose interest. Look at it from Nadell's point of view; it's his first hunt, and he had no idea what fighting a Diablos would be like. So the others have to explain as much as they can to him in the time between attacks. It's supposed to make visualizing it easier, while eliminating the need for a separate "ecology" section, like I did way back when I wrote about Chameleo-Fatalis. But now that the basics of its attack patterns have been explained, I can make the conclusion more subjective, as you put it. After all, that was only the beginning of the fight. The true battle has yet to be written.