Talk:Fanfic: The Odyssey of a Believer: Surviving Odds/@comment-5028662-20121119201417

I just fixed one of the lower sections in terms of grammar and spelling; I hope you don't mind, Bari :3

Just for future reference:


 * Disease


 * Therapy

Also, did you know that you tend to use commas and full stops in the wrong places (i think it's just in that part)? I'd show you what I mean, but I've corrected it. SInce you're an Adminyou can no doubt compare the two revisions anytime if you take this to heart.

Sorry if I came off to critical, but I'm a grammar Nazi of sorts :P

Will try and read this fully sometime! ^.^)b