Talk:Fanfic:ceros the gallant (fixed)/@comment-109.78.50.173-20111204122918

Oh my god.. this is awful! Ceros is the biggest Mary Sue since D'ark Yagam'i, everything is ridiculously blown out of proportion, almost all of the monsters don't exist, everyone is always getting eaten for no apparent reason, the snake summoning thing is just retarded and everything else is awful.. what to do... I know! I'll link it to some dramatic readers!