Talk:Fanfic: Spem Habe (Have Hope)/@comment-3318452-20110622212235

Weel, HypnoHunter, I can say one thing: you did a great job, and gave an actual story wrote by a amn, who knows what he is doing. In a few places I laughed, in two places I was like 'man, no cool' (talking to the heroes), and that is what I liked: when I read the TigrexJeff's fanfic, I simply red a story. A nice story, with a nice plot, characters, love and a bit of moral. But that was a simple 'fact scanning', and in your story I really participated in what your characters did. And that is awesome. You write like a real writer: with the style of yours. And that is cool. Your fanfic is also nice for me, because it is like an unended story: you can think of some bigger things happening after the "END" sign. (I know it is ongoing, but I'm talking about what I see at the moment) The story I red is corresponding to the name: You told us about the boy, who lost a father, and then you gave him hope: Love. When I read Jeff's fanfic, I was like: "changing worlds... uh, okay... let's think what that means..." I do understand why he chose "Changing worlds", but lifes and time... and here you make it all clear. I read a nice story, without so much moral, with jokes and stuff... It is not a serious story, but come on: it'sfanfiction! And this is very good for a fanfiction. So, all in all, I want to tell you one thing: thank you. I read a story which I really liked. BRAVO!