Talk:Legacy of the Descendants XII: The Hidden Realm/@comment-5020152-20120806000233/@comment-5028662-20120806081426

Yes, but, it really could be worse. But this isn't Saw, so (*phew*). In some ways, one's inner empathy makes this pretty difficult to write, but I get there eventually ^^

Besides, it's no use building up Kazir's fear factor for nearly ten chapters without showing what he's like when he wants something.

That, and I need to build up as much hate for him a I can now, because he won't be in it (directly) as much in the next one. And, his karma is gonna build up...