Talk:The White Star Chronicles XI:Wrath of the Hell Wolf Wyvern/@comment-4775842-20120605235736

Anyway (this is after my reply below), not too many errors on this one, though I think I needed to change a sentence around for it to fit grammatical rules. I'm still a wandering in my head. Doing all these chapters in one day is exhausting.

I must say this chapter is the saddest, and is now my personal favorite of them. It's touched me more than anything I've read in a long time. I congratulate you on your ability to make me feel genuine sorrow.