Talk:The White Star Chronicles IV: A Hunter's Test/@comment-4775842-20120605222230

There were a few larger grammatical errors in this one. The first was when you were talking about the girls on 'either side of him' and 'group of red-robed women'. I fixed them as best I could without changing your style of writing, but if you feel there is a word that should be a different synonym or that a sentence needs formatting then I'm not stopping you. It is your story after all, Ukantor.