Talk:The White Star Chronicles XII: The City of Light/@comment-4775842-20120606001112/@comment-5028662-20120606083937

She was going to be as sweet as Aerith (FFVII) was, but then i changed my mind. it just didnt work with Hikari, which i based around Valhalla (FFXIII-2), with the gery sky and the grey building and the bell tolls and stuff. maybe if it was wedding belled rather that a funeral dirge...but still. An besides, Nina is the cold straightforward and melancholy bitch that we all love. just like Rachel Alucard (BlazBlue), who I based her on. and she seemes, cold, but she actually a character with alot of depth, but that gets hidden away in this. after I read them (i havent even read them except while typing lawl), I may deem it necesssary to do prequels fo eithe certain charcters or just a general prequel, ill see.

And she bacame the queen because her father isnt even there. this is one of those time where youre supposed to figure that out yourself. like in a story where the kid at the start has a mum but not a dad, or vice versa, and sometimes it never gets explained. this is one of those times.

And you would be able to see them, you jujst have to strain a bit. they wouldnt be microscopic. i would deem it imposssible to see with the naked eye if they were coming all the way from the desert, which is before even the GF. and besides, even if she couldnt physically see it, she has the gift of farsight, so she would see it, and what is the biggest point-SHES A SEERESS. even if she didnt see them she would know they are coming.

if it bugs you that much i can tweak that a little but otherwise... :|

An the most important point here...

'''IT'S A STORY! IT'S NOT MEANT TO BE LOGICAL! JUST ENJOY IT! XD'''