Talk:Monster Hunter The Adventure Begins:Part 2:Sinking Feelings/@comment-5028662-20120814210455/@comment-5028662-20120815220129

Because I'm used to reading things that are...legible. It's nigh on impossible to tell who is speaking, or what is going on. Alot of sentences don't have punctuation, such as commas or full stops, where the need to be implemented. Sure, the sentences have been seperated with a full stop, but many of the sentences are really two sentences without a full stop to seperate them, or a comma if the two sentences are related. Such small errors have created literary entropy all over. It's one long wall of sparsely interrupted text.

I'd be happy to attempt to correct it, but frankly, there are so many mistakes that it's too much for a one-man job. When I'm done writing my fanfiction I can see if I can fix this all up, but I'd have employ my friends in that regard.

Also, just out of curiosity, what country are you from?