Talk:Fanfic:The Darkstar Knight (Part 3)/@comment-209.252.168.66-20110906035937

By the way, the new beginning sounds good, but maybe as occasional flashbacks, I found the chameleon-fatalis battle a good set up for DarkStars character, and would hate to see it removed. I would buy the novel in a heartbeat though, monster hunter should really get some books.