Talk:The White Star Chronicles V:Departure/@comment-4775842-20120605223709

The grammatical errors here were minor, such as not including a space after apostrophes or sentences. There was a change I made though to Sensei Ryu's last sentence. I ommited the word crazy, because Ryu, and almost any other person who is defined as mentally unstable, is unlikely to call themselves crazy, unless they're a psychopath. In my opinion, it's amazing he got out as much coherent information as he did, without putting himself down. I think there was one more larger edit, but now I've forgotten what it was since my mind got sidetracked.