Talk:MHD: Chronicle XIII - Leaving the Mysterious Beyond/@comment-50.104.225.72-20130519024801

Great story. I thought it overall very entertaining; it had many twists and very intense action segments. Although, I did find there were some grammar and spelling mistakes, and I would encourage more thorough proof-reading in future writings. Also, I found it odd that there was no mention (or very little) of the Guild in this. If the Guild was mentioned in this, or involved with some earlier writings, could you direct me to such.Or, is the Guild just a discarded idea for the writings all together? Please let me know; I really enjoy this series!