Talk:Fate and Freedom I: Life Among the Ashes/@comment-5020152-20120809173716/@comment-5028662-20120809191328

1. CM, it's just a story, c'mon. I'm pretty sure that the Great Forest is not next to the Tundra, but here, they are. Just cal down a bit. (And good job! ^^)b)

2. Yes, but it kinda becomes a little more serious when one has that dream while actually under imperial control.

It's not quite the way I had planned it to be...but I had to try as hard as I could to change the style,etc slightly, seeing as it's from a different vantage point(s). Gale and co. will obviously be in it, but like I said, this one's hopefully gonna be a little slower. I felt that I rushed the last two in some places, making it work just about. This time, I don't want to settle for 'just about'. If you see what I mean.

If I'm honest, I'm not very good at taking criticism, so this response was slightly indirect. But at least I can admit that I'm not good at the aforementioned. It's better than being a hypersensitive bitch, right? ^^