User blog comment:Ghost-ludachris/Rough Storyline/@comment-3353264-20110712133658

Revenge is over-used in my opinion. Monster Hunter has always fascinated me with the theme of freedom. Thus the title Monster Hunter Freedom. Hunters are free men, to roam the wide open world and make a name for themselves. To focus on revenge seems to put a certain restriction on one character. Both MHFU and MHP3RD have characters that come to the village with only their clothing and weapons. They pave their own path from there. I recommend weaving some new elements into the middle part of the story rather than change the whole storyline. Still, that doesn't mean your ideas aren't great. Ideas never die, they are energy, and can be refined and improved, or changed according to circumstances. Get them flowing mates! As for me, I have an idea as well, but it seems generic-ish. I'll refine it in the future.